JujuFish Posted December 6, 2010 Report Share Posted December 6, 2010 The slash above SabreSpace doesn't show up behind the second S. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SDS Posted December 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2010 The slash above SabreSpace doesn't show up behind the second S. I don't know what this means. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R_Dudley Posted December 6, 2010 Report Share Posted December 6, 2010 Defintely the bottom SabreSpace however the second 'S'pace does not appear quite the same as the first 'S'abre ( 1st appears to be more of an S on the move). I think both S's should look like the first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shoveldog Posted December 6, 2010 Report Share Posted December 6, 2010 I don't know what this means. Look at the second "S", the swoosh line up top behind it should have a bottom line behind the trailing tail at the top of the "S". Hope that makes sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeopoldFan3 Posted December 6, 2010 Report Share Posted December 6, 2010 I got the reference right away too. I really like the logo! My only comment is to straghten out the letters a little more. The 'PACE' letters seem a little a squished. As a designer myself, nice work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePebble19 Posted December 6, 2010 Report Share Posted December 6, 2010 Bottom one. Very nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Two or less Posted December 6, 2010 Report Share Posted December 6, 2010 Bottom one. Great job, SDS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SDS Posted December 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2010 Closing in... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shrader Posted December 6, 2010 Report Share Posted December 6, 2010 Next step, color... but obviously that's in the plans. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SDS Posted December 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2010 Next step, color... but obviously that's in the plans. we have exited the sketch phase and are now moving to Adobe Illustrator. We just wanted the basic form down. I'm much more comfortable now than I was previously with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taro T Posted December 6, 2010 Report Share Posted December 6, 2010 Closing in... Scott, It looks very sharp. The only 2 tweaks I'd suggest would be to have the letters in Sabre (ABRE) curve slightly along the curves above and below them; and slide the gap in the lower curve to the right to fit the 2nd 'S'. (My guess is you already planned to do that; if so, then as Emily used to say 'never mind.') :beer: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wjag Posted December 7, 2010 Report Share Posted December 7, 2010 Looks nice, Am I the only one who sees SABRES PACE? :doh: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost of Dwight Drane Posted December 7, 2010 Report Share Posted December 7, 2010 For some reason, I suddenly have a hankering for a burger from Burger King circa 1981. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X. Benedict Posted December 7, 2010 Report Share Posted December 7, 2010 For some reason, I suddenly have a hankering for a burger from Burger King circa 1981. Hold the pickles, Hold the lettuce, special orders won't upset us..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost of Dwight Drane Posted December 7, 2010 Report Share Posted December 7, 2010 Hold the pickles, Hold the lettuce, special orders won't upset us..... Sound's like Derek Roy's kinda place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SDS Posted December 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2010 almost there... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X. Benedict Posted December 9, 2010 Report Share Posted December 9, 2010 almost there... That's looking good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spndnchz Posted December 9, 2010 Report Share Posted December 9, 2010 FWIW, IMHO, those little tails on the S's remind me too much of the slug toupee, or something else I won't get into. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SDS Posted December 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2010 FWIW, IMHO, those little tails on the S's remind me too much of the slug toupee, or something else I won't get into. so, do you think they should end in sharp points like a few of those on the "B"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taro T Posted December 9, 2010 Report Share Posted December 9, 2010 almost there... Overall it looks good. I'd probably adjust the tilt on the right side of the 1st 'A', or adjust the tilt on sides of the 'BRE'. I like the curve to the tops/bottoms of the 1st letters; and like that they seem to straighten out on 'PACE'. Also, although the 2nd 'S' looks good, I liked the way how it was a little larger before and cut into the lower underline. I like trimming the top line back to just covering the 'ABRE'. Your artist does good work. :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spndnchz Posted December 9, 2010 Report Share Posted December 9, 2010 so, do you think they should end in sharp points like a few of those on the "B"? I don't think I have an answer here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darksabre Posted December 9, 2010 Report Share Posted December 9, 2010 In the words of Enrique, Baby, I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shrader Posted December 9, 2010 Report Share Posted December 9, 2010 Ahhh, color. It does wonders here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frisky Posted December 9, 2010 Report Share Posted December 9, 2010 Looks pretty good overall. I like a little more color though like gold somewhere. Possibly silver outlining? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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